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Monday, 4 May 2020

Recount

On Sunday me and my bother and my mum made a mudslide. The mudslide was on a hill. We made the mudslide by sitting on our butt and sliding down the hill to make the mud smooth.
Mum said " Put some old clothes on". So we got some old clothes on and went outside. Mum put some detergent on and we hopped on the mudslide and went so fast.
When I went down the mudslide our mum poured a bucket of water down the mudslide. Suddenly mum was sliding down. I said "watch out". Mum bumped into me and pushed me right down. After that I was so  muddy. After that I had to strip off and wash the mud off myself. After I had a ice block out of the freezer because we were so hot.

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2 comments:

  1. Jessica Neave4 May 2020 at 12:08

    That sounds like so much fun Piper! I really enjoyed reading your recount it was detailed and I like how you used speech marks :)

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  2. Mr Ben McConnell7 May 2020 at 14:45

    I thought your recount was very well written and detailed. I like the photo of you and your brother all covered in mud. Judging by the big smiles on your faces you guys must of had heaps of fun.

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